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1. I was watching the TV when I turned on the news channel and the person who was talking was like dang, “its a hurricane, oh my god its a hurricane”, and I was like dang, “I think I’m going to die”. 
2. I was sitting in my desk day dreaming about getting out of school, [...]

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1. He hooks the reader by comparing the days of his great grandparents and his days and the days to come. 
2. He brings up the wars about his grandfather being in the war class of 1942. Since being in the war he must of saw terrible things.
3. Since 1942 the days of America have gotten [...]

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After hearing T. Susan Changs essay I realized that she uses a lot of imagery. Well maybe not a lot but the parts that stuck in my head were the ones that I was visualizing. Such as holding hands and watching the clouds make shapes overhead. It sounded like even though technology is developing very [...]

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My experience with writing has been pretty good. Last semester with Ms. Bemis was a blast. Sometime when i was asked to write and it made a good impression was when Ms. Bemis told the class to write about someone you care about. I wrote about Emmett. He’s been a good friend since the pre-school [...]

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