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Pink Floyd Sentence Combining
 
Combine each grouping of sentences into one sentence using all of the sentence combining tricks at your disposal.
 
1.         The sky is reddened by a typical Midwestern sunset.
2.         The sky begins clouding over just before dusk.
       The sky begins clouding over just before dusk and the sky reddened by a typical Midwestern sunset [...]

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Bobby LeCount
Dedication
 
            Dedication is when you really care about something and devote most of your free time to it. When I dedicate to something I don’t just show up, I think about it 24/7 and try to get mentally ready for what might happen. And if I don’t think about it all the time it [...]

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Bobby LeCount
Essay Fun
P.5
Coaching
 
Without a good coach there’s no stability in a team. A prime example of this is the 2007-2008 Shorewood Baseball Team. We had a lot of talent and were better than what our 13-10 record showed for. There were three or four games where we lost by a couple runs, or made some [...]

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1. A rant is like when you start off on something and then you keep going on about it and then go to something else and keep going on with that. Like dragging it out. This is a rant because it just keeps dragging it out.
2. A rant is changed in the age of the [...]

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Being happy is when your in the right state of mind. It’s kind of like happy gilmore, you have to find your happy place. But if things in your are going wrong it easy to go into the wrong state of mind. To stay happy you should hang around people who make you feel good, [...]

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1. I was watching the TV when I turned on the news channel and the person who was talking was like dang, “its a hurricane, oh my god its a hurricane”, and I was like dang, “I think I’m going to die”. 
2. I was sitting in my desk day dreaming about getting out of school, [...]

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1. He hooks the reader by comparing the days of his great grandparents and his days and the days to come. 
2. He brings up the wars about his grandfather being in the war class of 1942. Since being in the war he must of saw terrible things.
3. Since 1942 the days of America have gotten [...]

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After hearing T. Susan Changs essay I realized that she uses a lot of imagery. Well maybe not a lot but the parts that stuck in my head were the ones that I was visualizing. Such as holding hands and watching the clouds make shapes overhead. It sounded like even though technology is developing very [...]

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My experience with writing has been pretty good. Last semester with Ms. Bemis was a blast. Sometime when i was asked to write and it made a good impression was when Ms. Bemis told the class to write about someone you care about. I wrote about Emmett. He’s been a good friend since the pre-school [...]

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